Post by D.J Cat on Apr 22, 2023 18:46:37 GMT 10
Sure, here's a fanfiction set on the planet of Zoness from Starfox 64.
Title: Saving Zoness
It had been several years since the Star Fox team had last visited the planet of Zoness. The aquatic world was once home to a thriving ecosystem, but after Andross waged war on the Lylat System, he had poisoned Zoness's oceans with toxic waste.
Now, the once-blue ocean was a murky green with a foul smell that permeated the air. The bare wasteland areas that surrounded Zoness was now the only place where anything grew. On this visit, however, Team Star Fox had no interest in the barren Earth-like regions. The intel they had been given suggested that one of Andross's factories was located somewhere off the coast.
Slippy had prepared a prototype of a new submarine for the team that could withstand the harsh environmental conditions of the planet, while also being able to navigate through enemy lines without too much hassle.
The team set out on their new submarine, the Blue Marine, towards the factory. As they cruised through the thick water clouds, Peppy hit upon a possible strategy to take out the enemy subs that would inevitably cross the ship's way.
As they approached the hidden underwater factory, they noticed it was commandeered by one of Andross's most maniacal commanders, Oikonny. Peppy laid out the new plan of action: Slippy and himself would infiltrate the base and plant explosives, while Fox and Falco would provide cover from above. They knew that they had to work fast, as the factory could be rigged to self-destruct any minute.
As they split the up-to-divide conquer-and-conquer strategy, Peppy and Slippy stayed under the radar making sure not to trigger the defense that would allow the octopian slaving operation to flood at most of the system. While Fox and Falco ventured above, brawling with Andross's forces and persevering through waves of enemy aircraft.
Peppy managed to plant the last explosive when he stumbled upon the captive marine creatures being overtaken and sent away to fulfill who knows what Oikonny's sick ambitions were. His thoughts took him back to the home planet of the Star Fox team: Corneria. He felt disgusted by how twisted the ambition of an individual, caught in its own endless loop and bizarre plans, could have such a despicable disregard for life itself.
Still, he knew it would be in the best interest of Zoness and his crew to pull through this mission together.
Eventually, Peppy and Slippy emerged out of the factory and began navigating back to the submarine. As they emerged from out of the factory, the pursuing forces of Oikonny showed up, making sure that they wouldn't be able to get their hands on any intel this group might've taken.
Fox and Falco were overwhelmed by the sheer force that the enemies had thrown at them, but thankfully the Blue Marine was just about ready to make its escape. The two turtles gasped as they saw the organic starcraft maneuvering past them, under directives given by Fox McCloud.
One after another, the subs protecting Andross's forces succumbed to Peppy and Slippy's explosive-ridden trail, and were ultimately defeated. The day was won, it seemed. And yet, the aftermath and the stress of the mission left no room for talks of revelry.
It was time to get off this wasteland of a planet, the Star Fox team primed to take on the next quest of mad villainy across the galaxy's corner.
NOTE:
This is a good one, although I feel this is the first time I've seen some very wonky writing, some sentences seemed a bit off.
I think Zoness, and for that matter every planet in the Lylat System has such depth and lore to explore.
Title: Saving Zoness
It had been several years since the Star Fox team had last visited the planet of Zoness. The aquatic world was once home to a thriving ecosystem, but after Andross waged war on the Lylat System, he had poisoned Zoness's oceans with toxic waste.
Now, the once-blue ocean was a murky green with a foul smell that permeated the air. The bare wasteland areas that surrounded Zoness was now the only place where anything grew. On this visit, however, Team Star Fox had no interest in the barren Earth-like regions. The intel they had been given suggested that one of Andross's factories was located somewhere off the coast.
Slippy had prepared a prototype of a new submarine for the team that could withstand the harsh environmental conditions of the planet, while also being able to navigate through enemy lines without too much hassle.
The team set out on their new submarine, the Blue Marine, towards the factory. As they cruised through the thick water clouds, Peppy hit upon a possible strategy to take out the enemy subs that would inevitably cross the ship's way.
As they approached the hidden underwater factory, they noticed it was commandeered by one of Andross's most maniacal commanders, Oikonny. Peppy laid out the new plan of action: Slippy and himself would infiltrate the base and plant explosives, while Fox and Falco would provide cover from above. They knew that they had to work fast, as the factory could be rigged to self-destruct any minute.
As they split the up-to-divide conquer-and-conquer strategy, Peppy and Slippy stayed under the radar making sure not to trigger the defense that would allow the octopian slaving operation to flood at most of the system. While Fox and Falco ventured above, brawling with Andross's forces and persevering through waves of enemy aircraft.
Peppy managed to plant the last explosive when he stumbled upon the captive marine creatures being overtaken and sent away to fulfill who knows what Oikonny's sick ambitions were. His thoughts took him back to the home planet of the Star Fox team: Corneria. He felt disgusted by how twisted the ambition of an individual, caught in its own endless loop and bizarre plans, could have such a despicable disregard for life itself.
Still, he knew it would be in the best interest of Zoness and his crew to pull through this mission together.
Eventually, Peppy and Slippy emerged out of the factory and began navigating back to the submarine. As they emerged from out of the factory, the pursuing forces of Oikonny showed up, making sure that they wouldn't be able to get their hands on any intel this group might've taken.
Fox and Falco were overwhelmed by the sheer force that the enemies had thrown at them, but thankfully the Blue Marine was just about ready to make its escape. The two turtles gasped as they saw the organic starcraft maneuvering past them, under directives given by Fox McCloud.
One after another, the subs protecting Andross's forces succumbed to Peppy and Slippy's explosive-ridden trail, and were ultimately defeated. The day was won, it seemed. And yet, the aftermath and the stress of the mission left no room for talks of revelry.
It was time to get off this wasteland of a planet, the Star Fox team primed to take on the next quest of mad villainy across the galaxy's corner.
NOTE:
This is a good one, although I feel this is the first time I've seen some very wonky writing, some sentences seemed a bit off.
I think Zoness, and for that matter every planet in the Lylat System has such depth and lore to explore.